Dhee

Hi All,

Posting my yet another creation , may be thats why the poem is so long
But it would be worth reading.
The concept and context is real and is very close to my heart.
Don’t want to get sympathy out of it so wont elaborate much on this.

Read and if it touches any heart then do revert.

Dhee

Maa di kukh da banke shingaar jammi
lain waaste laad dulaar jammi
dunya ghar hai aukraa’n(problems) mushklaa’n da
par main vi hoke tyar bar tyar jammi

pehla bacha si ghar da es karke
sabne paaleya reejhaa’n te naaz de naal
2 saal tak janam-din mera
mannda reha ae rasmo riwaaz de naal

pehla saal jaa'n mera ho geya poora
pehla kadam mai’n dharti te jaa rakheya
apne paiyraa’n utte khare hon wala
wakhra jeya main ohh ehsaas chakheya

saah jinne vi lainde haa’n jagg andar
saare saah oh likhe te ginne hunde
eh nahi pta si jeevan de raah utte
jinne kadam puttne oh vi minne hunde

charhdeyaa’n saar hi doosra saal mera
ikdamm hi kadam si dagmagaaye
bhaana warteya honi ne chaal challi
chaal vigri te paiyr si ladkharaaye

halle "mummy" hi bolna sikheya si
haav bhaav de naal samjhaun laggi
" mummy.. bhaar nahi pairaan te pay reha ae"
mummy wekhke thoda ghabraun laggi

ose wele nazdeek de doctor nu
meri chaal te haal vikha ditta
2-3 test jad karke wekh leete
usne faisla ehm suna ditta

tuhadi dhi di thatthi zubaan waangu
isdi chaal vi totli ho gayi ae
isnu ho gya polio eh ajton
keval dukhaan di potli ho gayi ae

fatteya kaalja fattan di satt vajji
mammi aapna maarke jee turr payi
seene vich sametke dukh saare
bukkal wich laike apni dhee turr payi

mai'n taan chhoti saa'n mainu na samajh aayi
ramz naina ch rame hoye neer wali
Akhaan wich lukaake dukh dahda
takdi hatthaan te rekha taqdeer wali


jinna marzi ilaaj parhez karlo
jo kujh hona hunda hoke reh janda
mehal wich khayaalaan jo usrda hai
noor pallaan de vich hi dheh janda


dharti utte na bhaar vi pai sakeya
naahi bhaar painda mere godeyaan te
16 saal tak mera peyo mainu
chukda reha ae apne modheyaan te


baapu naina chon neer nai ker sakda
andaron andar oh tutt-da jaanvda hai
apne haunsle tutt-de jaan usde
(par) mera haunsla sadaa wadhaanvda hai

supne doli bithaun de wekhda si
modhe utte bitha ke sochda hoyu
mere naina ch neer nahi wekh sakda
apne ashq luka ke sochda hoyu


paiyr chalde na, fer vi khari haan mai'n
apne payraa'n te bade hi maan de naal
kardi naman mai'n akhaaan namm karke
maa-peyo nu adab sanmaan de naal

mainu kade mehsus na hon ditta
vitto'n wadhke ditta pyar mainu
ena pyaar dulaar je eyon milda
apaahaj hona hai sadaa sweekar mainu..
“noor” edaan ee rehna sweekar mainu..

-Noor