Dhee

Hi All,

Posting my yet another creation , may be thats why the poem is so long
But it would be worth reading.
The concept and context is real and is very close to my heart.
Don’t want to get sympathy out of it so wont elaborate much on this.

Read and if it touches any heart then do revert.

Dhee

Maa di kukh da banke shingaar jammi
lain waaste laad dulaar jammi
dunya ghar hai aukraa’n(problems) mushklaa’n da
par main vi hoke tyar bar tyar jammi

pehla bacha si ghar da es karke
sabne paaleya reejhaa’n te naaz de naal
2 saal tak janam-din mera
mannda reha ae rasmo riwaaz de naal

pehla saal jaa'n mera ho geya poora
pehla kadam mai’n dharti te jaa rakheya
apne paiyraa’n utte khare hon wala
wakhra jeya main ohh ehsaas chakheya

saah jinne vi lainde haa’n jagg andar
saare saah oh likhe te ginne hunde
eh nahi pta si jeevan de raah utte
jinne kadam puttne oh vi minne hunde

charhdeyaa’n saar hi doosra saal mera
ikdamm hi kadam si dagmagaaye
bhaana warteya honi ne chaal challi
chaal vigri te paiyr si ladkharaaye

halle "mummy" hi bolna sikheya si
haav bhaav de naal samjhaun laggi
" mummy.. bhaar nahi pairaan te pay reha ae"
mummy wekhke thoda ghabraun laggi

ose wele nazdeek de doctor nu
meri chaal te haal vikha ditta
2-3 test jad karke wekh leete
usne faisla ehm suna ditta

tuhadi dhi di thatthi zubaan waangu
isdi chaal vi totli ho gayi ae
isnu ho gya polio eh ajton
keval dukhaan di potli ho gayi ae

fatteya kaalja fattan di satt vajji
mammi aapna maarke jee turr payi
seene vich sametke dukh saare
bukkal wich laike apni dhee turr payi

mai'n taan chhoti saa'n mainu na samajh aayi
ramz naina ch rame hoye neer wali
Akhaan wich lukaake dukh dahda
takdi hatthaan te rekha taqdeer wali


jinna marzi ilaaj parhez karlo
jo kujh hona hunda hoke reh janda
mehal wich khayaalaan jo usrda hai
noor pallaan de vich hi dheh janda


dharti utte na bhaar vi pai sakeya
naahi bhaar painda mere godeyaan te
16 saal tak mera peyo mainu
chukda reha ae apne modheyaan te


baapu naina chon neer nai ker sakda
andaron andar oh tutt-da jaanvda hai
apne haunsle tutt-de jaan usde
(par) mera haunsla sadaa wadhaanvda hai

supne doli bithaun de wekhda si
modhe utte bitha ke sochda hoyu
mere naina ch neer nahi wekh sakda
apne ashq luka ke sochda hoyu


paiyr chalde na, fer vi khari haan mai'n
apne payraa'n te bade hi maan de naal
kardi naman mai'n akhaaan namm karke
maa-peyo nu adab sanmaan de naal

mainu kade mehsus na hon ditta
vitto'n wadhke ditta pyar mainu
ena pyaar dulaar je eyon milda
apaahaj hona hai sadaa sweekar mainu..
“noor” edaan ee rehna sweekar mainu..

-Noor

Till to'n Dil Tak...

Hi All,

Coming back with another creation, this time with a lighter and romantic mood.
Enjoy it…

keha till eh nira Qaatil jaape,
dil nu cheerda cheerda cheer janda
pehla’n nazar paindi tere till utte,
mukhre wall dhyaan akheer janda

Jivein chann te daag da hai rishta,
rishta jis tarah phull te khaar da hai,
Gore mukh te sobhda till kala,
nazri'n uttarda nazar utaarda hai,

kehri jagah te kehri thaan lavaa’n,
Kujh ku pal taan Oh(Rabb) vi dochitt hona,
ginti minti, jamaah, ghataa karke,
usda lageya poora ganitt hona

kaala till banaake mukhre te,
chhadd diti hai apni chhaap usne
nahi esto’n sohni bana sakda,
jaape laa ditta full staap(stop) usne


jehra nazro’n bachaanda hai till tainu,
oss till nu nazar na lag jaave
wekho wekhi iss till nu wekhne layi
sara jagg hi magar na lag jave

kivein till ton dil takk mai’n pahunchaa'n
tilk jaavan mai’n jad vi tiLl wekhaa’n
samjh aundi nahi keha safar hai eh
raste wekhaa’n ya fir manzil wekhaa’n

doori till ton dil di eyo'n jaape
jivein satt samundro'n paar jana
thodi der zarur hai “Noor” lagdi,
aina mushkil vi nahi hai pyar paana..

-Noor

Jeevan Jaach

Hi All,

I am sharing my brand new poem with another unique thought.
This poem depicts the “Jeevan Jaach” means “Life Style” of a “Dog”, that’s right..”The Dog”.
I hope you all will like the concept and its execution.
Feedback would be appreciated and criticism would be welcomed.
Enjoy the poem:

Jeevan Jaach
Paiyda hunde to’n thokkraa’n wass mere
maa chhad jaandi peyo pta vi nahi
Iss wich mera kasoor hai ki dasso
kiti mai koi galti ya khtaa vi nahi

Mera janam hai gaalaa’n da janamdaata
mere naam to’n log badnaam hunde
jo hai paalda naam vi ohi dinda
odaan mere jye bade gumnaam hunde

Waffadaari da kise khitaab ditta
kehke laalchi vi sharamsaar kitta
do burkiyaan jisne khawa dittiyan
jeevan bhar mai usda satkaar kitta

badnaami wich wi hoeya mash-hoor aksar
filmaa wich vi mai istemaal hoeya
dharam bhaaji de munh te fabbda saa'n
bol dailogue da jad vi gaalh hoeya

meri maute aj marde ne log kinne
khatteya jagg te taaj badnaamiyaan da
rutba fer vi apna banaayi rakheya
rakhda saambhke ghar asaamiyaan da

othe pahunch sakda tauhr naal jithe
wadde wadde di pahunch nahi jaa sakdi
laake hikk de naal sawaun mainu
neend mere bagair nhi aa sakdi

maalik car chalaave mai naal behnda
meri tauhr na maalik ton ghatt hundi
nakhre karan te kidhre aa jaavaan
wekho seva meri jhattpatt hundi

shaunq ban geya ameerzaadeyaan da
pehlon bandeyan ton mainu mile roti
aipar veer mere tarsan rijk taayi'n
beshaq joothi hi sahi ,mil jaye boti

bina gall ton maarde satt loki
itta’n, dande te lattaa’n di maar sehnda
hoye wich taqleef taan har koi
apne gusse agge sadaa haar behnda

kyun na hoye insaaf jahaan andar
kyun na itt da patthar jawaab hove
kyun na khud nu badle de wich badlaa'n
kyun na mere wallon inqlaab hove
"noor" mere wallon inqlaab hove
"noor" mere wallon inqlaab hove

-Noor