Jeevan Jaach

Hi All,

I am sharing my brand new poem with another unique thought.
This poem depicts the “Jeevan Jaach” means “Life Style” of a “Dog”, that’s right..”The Dog”.
I hope you all will like the concept and its execution.
Feedback would be appreciated and criticism would be welcomed.
Enjoy the poem:

Jeevan Jaach
Paiyda hunde to’n thokkraa’n wass mere
maa chhad jaandi peyo pta vi nahi
Iss wich mera kasoor hai ki dasso
kiti mai koi galti ya khtaa vi nahi

Mera janam hai gaalaa’n da janamdaata
mere naam to’n log badnaam hunde
jo hai paalda naam vi ohi dinda
odaan mere jye bade gumnaam hunde

Waffadaari da kise khitaab ditta
kehke laalchi vi sharamsaar kitta
do burkiyaan jisne khawa dittiyan
jeevan bhar mai usda satkaar kitta

badnaami wich wi hoeya mash-hoor aksar
filmaa wich vi mai istemaal hoeya
dharam bhaaji de munh te fabbda saa'n
bol dailogue da jad vi gaalh hoeya

meri maute aj marde ne log kinne
khatteya jagg te taaj badnaamiyaan da
rutba fer vi apna banaayi rakheya
rakhda saambhke ghar asaamiyaan da

othe pahunch sakda tauhr naal jithe
wadde wadde di pahunch nahi jaa sakdi
laake hikk de naal sawaun mainu
neend mere bagair nhi aa sakdi

maalik car chalaave mai naal behnda
meri tauhr na maalik ton ghatt hundi
nakhre karan te kidhre aa jaavaan
wekho seva meri jhattpatt hundi

shaunq ban geya ameerzaadeyaan da
pehlon bandeyan ton mainu mile roti
aipar veer mere tarsan rijk taayi'n
beshaq joothi hi sahi ,mil jaye boti

bina gall ton maarde satt loki
itta’n, dande te lattaa’n di maar sehnda
hoye wich taqleef taan har koi
apne gusse agge sadaa haar behnda

kyun na hoye insaaf jahaan andar
kyun na itt da patthar jawaab hove
kyun na khud nu badle de wich badlaa'n
kyun na mere wallon inqlaab hove
"noor" mere wallon inqlaab hove
"noor" mere wallon inqlaab hove

-Noor