zindagi kisi rel ki taraah...

Hi,

This time I have tried a different genre..”Khuli kavita”.
I am not sure how much successful I have been , in using this type of style..

Zindagi kisi rel ki taraah
patri pe chali ja rahi hai

farak hai ke thamti nahi
rukti nahi kisi station par

Rishte dibbon ki tarah judte hain,
toh kisi station pe chhoot jaate hain.

magar..zindagi kisi rel ki taraah
patri pe chali ja rahi hai

kuch musafir humsafar banke
fir agle hi mod se door nikl jaate hain

kuch log faatak ke uss paar se
haste hain, ghoorte hain, tippni bhi karte hain

magar..zindagi kisi rel ki taraah
patri pe chali ja rahi hai

chalti rahe toh acha hai..
darr hai ke patri se na uttar jaaye

apna toh hoga hi kahin,
auron ka bhi nuksaan na karde

zindagi kisi rel ki taraah
patri pe chali ja rahi hai

farak hai ke thamti nahi
rukti nahi kisi station par

-Noor

Akhiyo'n hanju wagde ne...

Hi,

I have tried to throw light on some social issues which come across each and every individual through one or the other sources.

Akhiyo'n hanju wagde ne...

Wekho neend kivein footpaatha’n te vi aa jaave
bhukh di maar to’n sateya hoyeya jootha kha jaave

kise gareeb de thand wich gode thodi'n lagde ne
eh wekh wekh fir akhiyo’n hanju wagde ne…

ajkal notaa’n saavei’n tolke mildiya’n votaa’n ne
kidda’n wajjdiya’n ajkal haqq sach te chottaa’n ne

aapu'n chune rehnuma appaa'n nu jad thagde ne
eh wekh wekh fir akhiyon hanju wagde ne..

maavaa’n bhainaa’n dheeyaa’n baajo’n ghar wich noor nahi
baaj enha de dunya khatam hai oh din door nahi..

jad bali daaj di charhke shole maggde ne
eh wekh wekh fir akhiyon hanju wagde ne…

kehnde puttraa’n jeda dunya wich sahaara nahi
aipar unha putta’n nu ee peyo di izzat gawaara nahi

vairi ban baithe putt ajkal peyo di pagg de ne
eh wekh wekh fir akhiyon hanju wagde ne…

apna dharam gavaake saadh pakhandi wall turr pye
sunke laalchiyaan di chikni chupri gall turr pye

andar nher hai fir vi baahr deevey jaggde ne
eh wekh wekh fir akhiyon hanju wagde ne…

ikko jeevan mileya kuch taan changa karam karo
je kuch hor nahi kar sakde bhora sharam karo

jis din dukh kise da apna banke laggega
fir "noor" kade na hanju akh cho'n waggega…
fir "noor" kade na hanju akh cho'n waggega…

-Noor